Metaphor gone wrong like a kid who was not funny try to come up with a funny line and keep ruining the joke by laughing just before the punch line and thus no one hears the punch line and misses the joke

I got the list from my class yesterday and couldn’t stop cracking up.  Michelle and Leyla didn’t find them so funny but I just couldn’t stop laughing… may be it’s because I can totally imagine myself doing same thing?  No…I am not funny enough to come up with these…  My fav. are #4, #14 and [...]

Stupid Mistake

I am still making same mistakes over and over it seems. Granted I didn’t spend enough time but I still have novice’s belief that my first writing that came out of ‘flow’ is good enough.
Of course it wasn’t

story needs story, an event. I somehow knew this but mine didn’t have that climax. the event [...]